Got my script back from the critics last week–veteran screenwriters who have been sufficiently jaded by Hollywood to make them first-rate as critics. Consensus?  They all loved the story, provided I change the beginning and ramp up the conflict/tension.  So I started the rewrite last Tuesday.  Will have it finished in Aug.  Then it goes to the agent in NY.  Should be an interesting fall. 

Title? Trading in Souls.  Storyline?  Ah, you’ll have to wait for that.